Cycles (I) ***NPAC ENTRY FEB 03***
She wraps life along her fingerto point and trace the way light should lingerI cough and shrugwonder-lust has been good to me so farIf I could I wouldOr so I tell myselfBut every time I see herI am...
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Erikthere is much beauty here toofeeling your wordstouching write ~ secret ~
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This is beautiful, Erik....The greatest love songs are those written and sung in honesty... and this feels honest as they come...Andrew"She writes scripture on my pages."
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-*Grins* The last line seemed a bit out of place wiht the rest of it- but it was cool (Kind of put a humourous swing on it.) Cool write, enjoyed.Po"You will close your eyes, in order not to see,...
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love the depth of emotions expressed in this, erik ... and as always, your creativity shines ... and hey ... I'd be ok with that kinda doom, too ... great job, erik ... really liked this one ...Hold...
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SecretAgainI thank you for your readand for your wordsERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and Rimbaud.But there's no way I can compareAll those...
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AndrewYour thoughts and wordsalways mean a great deal to meI thank youERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and Rimbaud.But there's no way I can...
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Poyeah that was the intentionI'm glad that you thought it humorous tooERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and Rimbaud.But there's no way I can...
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JMLyeah sometimes you just have to let go ofall the controland be a slave to the groove of the soulERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and...
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I love the extended metaphor in this - very clever and a joy to read "Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic...
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ValoeMy thanks to you for the readI am glad that you enjoyedERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and Rimbaud.But there's no way I can compareAll...
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beautiful words E-man, hehe we call those ~chick reference ~killers lol melting women away great read pal I enjoyed it much.LuVMeHappy New YearMoonchild/AKA-Wrathchild"...he came out of nowhere,...
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Great writing Erik, beautiful and romantic as hell and so very real. You get all the feeling and insecurity in here to help drive it all home. Enjoyed as always, peace!
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DreamerMy thanks to you for the read and the thoughtsGlad that you likedERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and Rimbaud.But there's no way I can...
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Thanks for the readI am so glad that you liked this oneERikSituations have ended sad,Relationships have all been bad.Mine've been like Verlaine's and Rimbaud.But there's no way I can compareAll those...
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